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April 28, 2001
Giving voice to Palestinian perspectives
 


A face-to-face meeting with a Foreign News Desk

Ahmed Bouzid

On April 24th, 2001, Palestine Media Watch met with the Philadelphia Inquirer's Foreign News Desk. Present from the Inquirer were Paul Nussbaum, Foreign Desk editor, Rebecca Klock, Deputy Foreign editor, Michael Matza, foreign correspondent, and Lillian Swanson, Ombudsman. From Palestine Media Watch were Ahmed Bouzid, Susan Abulhawa, and Mark Miller.

Our meeting took place at 5:00 pm, and lasted one hour. The focus of the meeting was the report we had written on the Inquirer's coverage of the Palestinian-Israeli crisis between January 1, 2001 and March 31, 2001. A copy of the report can be found at:

http://www.pmwatch.org/pmw/reports/042401report.html

The presentation focused on three main issues: the headlines, some aspects of the content, and the total lack of any maps depicting the Palestinian state proposed by Ehud Barak and Bill Clinton.

We examined headlines: front page headlines and regular headlines. We pointed out that although the number of Palestinians killed is approximately one order of magnitude that of Israelis, as many headlines were issued during this period pertaining to Israeli deaths as to Palestinian deaths. We also pointed out that although 100 Palestinian children have been killed, not once has a Palestinian child been headlined. The one Israeli child killed up to that point was headlined in the front page. We said that we do appreciate the novelty driven nature of headlines and news, but that some kind of a semblance to reality needs to be reflected in the headlines.

We noted that the following were never front page headlined:

- UN reports/resolutions
- Human rights reports/findings
- Israeli assassination of Palestinian officials
- Killing of Palestinian children
- House demolitions
- Palestinian economic hardships
- Palestinian calls for peace
- Hanan Ashrawi - no. 1 Palestinian spokesperson - injured in demonstration


We received no challenge on the headlines issue from the Inquirer's side.

A brief but heated discussion took place over the characterization of Hebron as a "divided city". We complained that the characterization is misleading Hebron is an occupied city under siege, we argued. Paul insisted that the characterization "divided" is accurate enough and that given that all the relevant data about numbers of settlers vs. number Palestinians is given in the article, the characterization "divided" is not misleading. We insisted that, in our opinion, the characterization is misleading, since it gives the impression of equal validity of claim to the land by both sides.

Another heated discussion concerned the use of words such as "terrorist". Paul and others on his side said that they do not find the word useful and that they try as much as they can to avoid using it. However, they drew a distinction between, on the one hand, calling people "terrorists" and describing actions as being "terrorist", and argued that they are very reluctant to assign the first label to either side of the conflict, but think it is justifiable to call certain acts "terrorist". We said that we may go along with that, but wondered why they did not label acts committed by the IDF as acts of terrorism, since they did have the effect of terrorizing populations. They did not seem to have an answer to that. Instead, they argued back that characterizing Israeli action is not hard since all the terms are clear cut and ready: there is an army, with soldiers as the actors, and armies conduct military operations, etc., whereas in the case of Palestinians, the assignations are less specific. We pointed out to them that the conflict between the two is never cast in terms of a people resisting an occupation, so that the "freedom fighter" framweork or a variation thereof would begin to frame the conceptual context and the shape what vocabulary to use. Paul replied with: "hell will have to freeze over first before we start calling anyone involved in this conflict a 'freedom fighter'."

Lillian Swanson asked how Robert Fisk manages to write about the conflict. We referred her to the couple of pieces we appended to the report and promised to send her more. We explained that it is not because he uses one or two words differently, but rather because of the whole framework from which he is working - one that starts from the observation that an occupation is in place and a people are fighting it - shapes his stories to highlight certain aspects vs others, set priorities, etc.

We also spent quite a bit of time on the issue of response" and "retaliation". We argued that stories headlined with "response" or "retaliation" right off the bat completely frame what is to come by casting the Israelis as acting in self defense. This, we said, enables the Israeli side to justify all actions as defensive acts. Paul and co. seemed to grasp our point and nodded several times. We pointed out that they could just as easily headline Palestinian actions as being retaliations to Israeli actions of home demolitions, retaliations to assassinations, etc. Paul and co. nodded again.

We also spent a considerable amount of time on the issue of maps. We expressed our great astonishment that the Inquirer has shown NOT ONCE, since the start of this Intifadha, a map depicting the Palestinian state proposed by the Israelis, instead repeating many times the figure 95%. We argued that the figure by itself is completely misleading, since it not only gives no idea whatsoever why the Palestinians refuse to accept the offer, but gives the reader the impression that the Palestinians are simply unreasonable and are in fact not interested in a settlements if they are jeopardizing the whole region for an additional 5%.

In our report, we reproduced a map in color showing the proposed Palestinian state.

Michael Matza pointed out that during the Camp David accords, no maps were released, and that as far as he remembers, no official maps have been released yet. We pointed out that as journalists, it is their jobs to investigate and provide information, even when nothing official is released. We pointed out that many maps do exist that give a very close approximation of the offers out there.

In addition, Michael Matza argued that we should not expect people to change their minds simply by showing them a map. We pointed out that the important issue here is that of coverage over a period of time, not swift conversions. Showing one single map may not turn things around, but showing it whenever the figure 95% is stated, for instance, will have the cumulative effect that eventually will lead people to understand that Palestinian resistance is not so irrational and self-destructive as it is made out to be now. In any case, we argued, as journalists, they are obligated to offer as accurate and complete a picture as possible, rather than worry about whether their coverage will or will not cause a paradigm shift.

Paul argued that it may be hard to depict such a complicated map, but did not seem to be saying that it was out of the question. The impression we have been left with -- although no hard promise was given -- is that they will consider publishing such a map in the future. We promised to provide them with other maps, from various sources.

We ended the meeting by going over a checklist that we think they should keep in mind when writing/editing pieces on the Palestinian-Israeli conflict. Here is the list:

  • Please use the word "alleged" when source is either side
  • Please do not insert the word "alleged" when not appropriate
  • Please use scare quotes around the words such "retaliation", "response", or avoid using such words
  • If you insist on using the words "retaliation" or "response", please use it also to explain actions taken from the Palestinian side - When Palestinians deny involvement, please report in the text soon after allegation is reported rather than bury the denial deep into the story
  • Please do not soften reality, just report it
  • Please headline Palestinian deaths more often
  • Please headline Palestinian children deaths more often
  • Just as you contextualize Israeli actions, you should contextualize Palestinian/Arab actions
  • Please show maps of proposals rather than state misleading figures


Ahmed Bouzid is president of Palestine Media Watch. Palestine Media Watch is a media Watch group that monitors US media coverage of the Palestinian-Israeli conflict. PMWatch's website is: http://www.pmwatch.org. To contact PMWatch, send email to: pmwatch@zworg.com

If you would like to contact the Philadelphia Inquirer's Foreign Desk, please send email to: foreign@phillynews.com




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